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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Like a dream you are to me every night, as I gaze upon the stars I fall asleep thinking about you. You my sweet darling that i adore so much, but a dream is not enough to explain the beauty of thee that brings you to me every night. With the moon you come to make me a lunatic of love and desire, for this not to be a dream, for it to be true, for you to be real. Your blue eyes, your blond hair, your perfect figure, like a model you are. Too bad that like the dreams you just come by. But you know such beauty will not exist for a long time. As i find you in my dream i desire a woman like you, but here i never thought i would find thee. As one night traveling gazing at the stars i find you beside me and with a sweet kiss we began a dream that would never end!. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I enjoyed this!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not too bad.  ~Allan |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is sweet! Nice work. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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