Fell in love with everything about you

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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-04-01 06:46 PM

Remember when I met you, you said your name
And I where lost for a moment or two
Can’t forget the way you smiled, when I touched you
To see that again I’d walk a thousand miles
Cause you’re the first one I have ever loved.

Standing with a letter from you in my hand
Wondering if you will ever understand
That from the first time I saw you
I feel in love with everything about you.

You looked straight into my eyes, and stole my heart
I can’t stop thinking about you day and night
Can’t forget the way you walked, right into my life
Wanna kiss your sweet lips every time you talk
Cause you’re the first one I have ever Loved.

If I could, I would be, with you eight days s week
Fly to a desert island just you and me
I want to spend the rest of my life with you
From now on till forever it’s true
Cause I fell in love with everything about you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-02 10:50 PM

this is so sweet. I liked it. Surprised it has no replies yet. Wonderful poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-04-03 02:30 PM

Well, as always! I love your work! They're all so wonderful, and this one is incredibly sweet! lol, I wish that just once I could be the one who's the object of one of thse love poems, because there are just so many good ones!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-04-05 04:13 PM

Good job on this poem, I like it a lot. I hope more people read it

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
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AsBurYAnGel
Junior Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 14
Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-05 07:50 PM

This is really sweet. I loved it. Good job.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-05-02 10:13 PM

You've shown us how much you really like this person. Hope things go well for you

Thanks for the beautiful read and keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-05-03 02:52 PM

Awwwwwwwwwww........

Very shweeet.
~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran

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