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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-04-30 06:23 PM


I can’t talk to you anymore,
I’ve ruined everything.
Y’all don’t talk anymore,
And I feel like it’s my fault.
I used to love him,
But liked you too.
He told me y’all stopped talking,
And that makes me feel bad.
All I said was that I used
To like you, but you said the same.
I saw you look my way,
You caught my eye.
And I saw you smile,
Couldn’t help but smile back.
I’ve come between cousins,
I promised myself I wouldn’t.
From the beginning,
I didn’t want to do that.
But I’ve ruined everything,
So I can’t talk to you anymore.

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-30 06:56 PM


Nice job on the poem, Tamma.  Hope you learn to talk to this person soon, it might be wise to realize that he might be feeling precisely as you are.  Could you take the initiative here, be the better man and talk to him first?
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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2 posted 2001-04-30 07:35 PM


Hey tamma hun..........Im here for ya and always have been....hehe well great poem i just have one question how come u dont email me anymore.. ? well ya know my email drop me a line...k bye bye great poem.

*Tears of love*
*Tears of faith*
*Never any Tears of hate*

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2001-04-30 09:02 PM


Wow. Sucks. I have absolutly no advice, since this situation is sticky...
I haven't got my psych degree yet...lol
No, but good luck, and nice poem.

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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4 posted 2001-04-30 11:17 PM


Enjoyed the poem Tamma!
Hope all gets better! *hugs*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-01 08:31 AM


Welcome to the world of why love sucks.  Why SOME guys suck, and the ones who don't are related.  Been there.  Nice poem tho.  If you wanna talk, I can really relate,  and I'm always here, Tamma, I hope you figure things out.  I hope that with every door that closes another one opens and I hope that makes any sense what so ever.  HUGS>

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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6 posted 2001-05-01 09:01 AM


You really should talk to the person you write this poem about.  It sounds like you need to at least try to work things out.  I hope things get better!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

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7 posted 2001-05-01 02:23 PM


Where will you get with this person if both of you avoid and ignore each other.  It's obviously bugging you if you're writing this about it, so why don't you initiate the make-up and talk to the other person first.  It might mean more to that person than you think.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Poet on Acid
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8 posted 2001-05-01 09:44 PM


wow, it's been a long time since I could sit down and read some good poetry, I'm glad I picked this one. It was great.

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

chas
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9 posted 2001-05-01 10:44 PM


Humm……..chocolate
Ina
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10 posted 2001-05-02 01:16 PM


I think chas has an obession with chocolate.....


Tamma. great poem....sad though....
I llike that whole "y'all " thing is very kool.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

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