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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-04-30 04:32 PM



God is...
The joy in a baby's laughter
The strength I have to go on another day
In the bird's harmonious praise
My Today, and all my tommorows

Love, Happiness, Giving
Everything I want and need
My light in dark times
When I am down I still find
that through me he can still shine
The morning dew on the clovers
the beauty of the sunset

My everything for everything
All you have to do is reach out
and know for yourself
that GOD IS!!!

Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on.....

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1 posted 2001-04-30 04:36 PM


awesome..
on the discription of your belief
i as always say i struggle with my faith
but you put it so well on your trust...
thanks for sharing
and keep writing

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-04-30 06:37 PM


It is nice to see such a profound expression of your belief, quite admirable that you are able to place such trust in a being that exists to you purely by faith.  
Well done.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

knightlyshadows
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3 posted 2001-04-30 08:36 PM


EWOKSTER  
wow is all i can say! lol
but ive already told u wut i 'thunked' bout this one so there u gos loves u muchs *Hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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4 posted 2001-04-30 11:09 PM


Beautiful poem on what God is....Very wonderful poem to read. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-01 02:13 PM


This is a beautiful poem.  It's nice to see that you're expressing what you believe in.  Nice work!  I enjoyed the read.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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