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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i walk two steps behind you always in your shadow always agreeing with you always taking the blame always doing what im told ...this is where i belong? that is what you told me that is what i believed that is what i did that is what i failed ...or did i? i found that i was your equal... better then you in ways. i found that i deserve... my chance in that spotlight. i found that you could be wrong... but so could i at times. i found that it wasnt always my fault... but i can accept it when it is. i found that i have courage... more the i could ever imagine. i found where i belong... and that wasnt with you! “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Whoa nice usage of html! It added a bit of flare to this. I liked it a lot...  ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh wow! Liberating and enpowering! I LIKE it! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl, I lived this.....you wrote of it perfectly!! This is excellent!! ( and in my library) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was nice.. i liked it.. keep writing   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Keel one Tiff Sounds like you could be the next Lisa Loeb :P Good expressions Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on..... |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Really good job on this one, Tiff, I like it alot, keep writing, take care. 2Good |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Definitely a very impressive poem. It glows with power and rebellion against supression. Excellent sentiments, and the organization and format are all top-notch. Another of your works enters my personal library. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
thanx guys muchs!  lisa lobe ewok:P heh lol this had nothing to do with me though its about a friend! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Enjoyable read. Very well done tiff. Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Awesome job with the bold and italics. That gave a nice feel for the poem. Good work! I enjoyed this. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I;m glad that you've realized that you don't deserve to be treated that way. More power to you "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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