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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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poet of life, weep not this day for soon the star will come that will brighten your way the star that you have sought for your whole life long that one star will come when she hears your song it's a song that you've sung since the beginning of life a song to find one who will end your strife but you've sung for so long you feel that none hear your heart still wishes for one for one to hold dear poet of life, I know your pain for I too once thought there would always be rain but I learned that after the storm there soon came the sun it was then that I found her my heart's only one so poet of life, weep not this day for soon her star will come to brighten your heart's way the star that you have sought for your whole life long her bright star will come when she hears your heart's song ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is so lovely and I am sure that Acire will just love it to bits. The content was beautiful. You're a top bloke, Sven.  ~AF~ " Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is beautifully done, your words truly stir the soul. anyone would be honored to have a piece like this written for them. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WOW....you always amaze me with these poems you write on our members of pip.. its such nice in considering and writing such beautiful pieces.. i really like that you are constantly posting them..hope to see more and on the poem..i thought you did an awesome job.. i bet acrie will love this...great poem and keep writing..   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awww this was a very great tribute to our dear friend...Enjoyed much by me and I'm sure the same will be true for him. Thanks for doing this, its really cool. ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is really cool! He better like it or I will kick his booty!  GRRRR*LOL* I am sure he will though! I know I do! Great job "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
How beautifully you have written of our friend, Sven. I love that you've brought your talents here to the teen forum. Can't wait to see who you describe next!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Erica's cute when she drops hints.  Well Sven, I must say I enjoyed this a great deal. Could you offer me some insight in the process of writing one of these, what steps you take to make each one of them so very personal? I'm very interested. This did seem to describe Acire for me... Poet of life, without a wife.  Very well done. He's a great guy, our Acire. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Beautifull gosh i dont know how to spell o noooooo time to go back to school..o i am well anyways i love this poem its so DANG great ha ha ha i love it good job. Branden *Tears of love* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sven, wonderful job on this one about Acire! I enjoyed it completely! You truly are a generous poet to be writing about other people here at Passions! Once again, simply wonderful. Very touching!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what a way to lift up someone else's spirits!!....i am touched by your tender nature as always, sven |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
AF, thank you. . . and I hope that he does like it!! banburycross, thank you very much. . . and if I honor someone, than it's all the more fulfilling for me. . . albert, there will be more in this series, here and in Open #13, look for them!! Thanks. . . Carly, thanks! Hope that he does enjoy. . . Suga_Baby, can I keep that kick in reserve??  Thanks!!!LoveBug, you never know. . . it could be someone very close to you. . . thanks!!Allan, yes she is isn't she?? LOL As far as the process goes, I'll send you an e-mail all about it. . . it's really cool!! Thanks for your interest!!branden, Bay City?? I used to live in Saginaw. . . always good to see another Michgan member on the board. . . thanks for your words, glad that you enjoyed!! Dopey, thank you. . . this is something that I really enjoy doing. . . it's neat to see everyone's reactions. . . kaile, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is such a beautiful poem! I'm sure acire is honored to have this written... --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What have I done to deserve such gracious, poetic, words. I'm totally speechless Sven. Thanks so much. I really appreciate the kind thoughts you've shared with me. Again, I would like to thank you. Just made my day "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awsome job..and see...acire did love it..i knew that from the beginning..great read *KiM* "i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow..this i so great. its heart warming that you would write sumthing as beautiful as this for another fellow poet..  great poem...trully wonderful! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marie, I see that he is. . . thank you for reading. . . lonely*soul, I knew that he would too!! Thanks!!! cherish, thank you. . . it's something that I enjoy doing. . . acire, my friend. . . you've just been you. . . and that's all that we'll ever want from you. . . you're doing a great job here and we all appreciate it!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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