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takemeawaytoday Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 13Missouri |
You said you would always be there for me You left when times got rough You said you would always care about me and love me You left again, when you werew scare of what might happen When I said we were through, You told me you were sorry. I had to let you go because of the pain It seems after much time of tring to forget you I gave up and let the tug inside me win The next time I saw you, you change so much I didn't even recognize You were so violent and cruel I was so scare of you I ran and hid, hoping you wouldn't find me. You never found me I thought I was out of danger I was wrong you found me You hurt me again When you finally gave up You never knew how much you really hurt me You never know how much you've actually been hurt or hurt someone else until the time has already passed. Don't be like the person in the peom. I know it's not that good of one but it comes from the heart and it need to be known |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"weLCOME TO PASSions" and i really liked the emotions in this poem even tho it wasnt good ones.. and i personally liked the last message you stated after the poem..it shows the reader to think more after the poem.. thanks for sharing and keep writing   ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
amazing jen you have a talent i never knew existed your poem was heartfelt and that made it great keep up the awesome work ok and welcome to passions ben ps. watch out for allan he is just a mean old man  i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it [This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
JEN!  HEY HUN DIDNT KNOW U WERE JOININ OR THAT YOU COULD WRITE!!!!! welcome to passions!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great poem  tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
NO, ALan is a good guy, dont be silly!!  BUt Great poem and welcome!! Jeff |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
First of all,  @everyoneInteresting verse. Couplets were a nice form to use in communicating this message. I suppose the advice would be helpful to some in many situations, thanks for the tip. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!! Please check your email for a special greeting SEA |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! the emotion in this piece was very good and i liked the format you used, couplets are good times. i know you'll love it here at passions, i look forward to reading lots more of your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcoome to passions!!! this was an amazing first post. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to passions!!!! I hope you enjoy your stay here. It was a very good first post and I hope to read more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! VERY nice first post! I enjoyed this quite a bit, and I looke forward to seeing more. Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Great poem *bell* OMG got to hurry or I will be late to my beloved spanish class okay well it was a wonderful poem and I am looking forward to more thanks for the great read okay teacher is yelling got to go buenos tardes (sp)-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome To Passions!!!! This was so unfair for the person to do 2 you and im sorry that you had that happen...I cant wait to read more from you and welcome again!!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Glad to see you join us here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy reading poems and sharing yur own work too. Thanks for the great read on the first work you've shared with us. Hope to see more in the future. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
welcome to passions!!! im sure youll love it here..great first poem..and definatly from the heart..i cant relate  *KiM* |
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