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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-04-29 12:45 PM

I am so lost
And I kill all the fish
I am so alone
And I kill all the fish

I feel like my world has fully fallen
And yet I know I have you Yes you, you are my lifesaver
I thank you dear friend
For to my heart you are so near

Sometimes I feel so lost
And I kill a fish
Sometimes I feel so alone
And I kill a fish

Sometimes I feel like my world has fully fallen
And yet there you standing
Catching all of my pieces
I love you dear friend
You make my life all worth baring

I am not lost
And I save the fish
I am not alone
And I save the fish

I know my world will not fully fall
And yet….here we are just having fun
Keeping our worlds together
We are forever together dear friend
And to you my friends I say

Let us not kill the fish

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-29-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-29 01:06 AM

sup with the killing of the fish man..LOL

anyways..
u always come up with these different poetry which was also interesting..i liked it
keep writing

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-04-29 01:52 AM

Great read. Keep writing and saving fish!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-29 02:58 AM

Amazing symbolism! And well organized, you did a great job on this! I am truly impressed!

Such wonderful talent and creativity displayed here, you should be proud of this.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-29 05:40 PM

I enjoyed this a lot. The fish thing was kinda weird, but very interesting.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

5 posted 2001-04-30 12:12 PM

dude u killing fish should i be all shocked likes? don't u kill this fishy <*//>< ha ha ha me b tired so u getz to read my messed responces to bad for u huh loves ya from me scarlet

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-01 08:36 AM

The fish thing made me crack up...and then i got serious... amazing work!
Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-09 01:43 PM

I would like to know whta the fish is suppose to symbolize?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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