Teen Poetry #4 |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i lay here by your side ive just shared with you everything everything... myself....my heart....my love....my soul you gave me nothing in return i am empty sapped of all my strength sapped of all of me there is nothing left but you and you give me nothing in return |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ouch Tiff. This is a horrible thing to have happen and you conveyed the emotions very well. Keep your head up. ~AF~ " Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it." |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Everything will be ok...trust me.. you expressed your emotions wonderfully SMILE Jeff |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
What a feeling... some advice- if a person does not give, learn to take for yourself. Very nicely done. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You write so much about pain and heartache, but then you seem to be so happy with ben....what's up with that? Anything up? Anyhow, nicely done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol ty guysas *Hugs* honestly i dont knows wheres i gest most of this stuffs i writes bouts... i just like write it lol. just words on paper. thanx for the encouragment and kindness! loves u guysas tiff i just sneezed! yay mes! “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*gives Tiff a hug*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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