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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-30 02:30 PM


i lay here by your side
ive just shared with you everything
everything...
myself....my heart....my love....my soul
you gave me nothing in return

i am empty
sapped of all my strength
sapped of all of me
there is nothing left but you
and you give me nothing in return

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-04-30 02:36 PM


Ouch Tiff. This is a horrible thing to have happen and you conveyed the emotions very well.

Keep your head up.

~AF~

" Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it."
The Devil - The Exorcist

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2 posted 2001-04-30 02:38 PM


Everything will be ok...trust me..
you expressed your emotions wonderfully
SMILE  
Jeff

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3 posted 2001-04-30 06:22 PM


What a feeling... some advice-  if a person does not give, learn to take for yourself.
Very nicely done.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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4 posted 2001-04-30 10:42 PM


You write so much about pain and heartache, but then you seem to be so happy with ben....what's up with that? Anything up?
Anyhow, nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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5 posted 2001-04-30 10:46 PM


lol ty guysas *Hugs* honestly i dont knows wheres i gest most of this stuffs i writes bouts...
i just like write it lol. just words on paper. thanx for the encouragment and kindness! loves u guysas

tiff       
i just sneezed! yay mes!

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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6 posted 2001-05-09 01:22 PM


~*gives Tiff a hug*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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