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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-28 05:25 PM

Our bodies beat as one
yet our hearts are so distant
there is pain and sorrow
in our old happiness
My love for you is true
the sky shines darkly against your soul
will you show me the way?

The steady beats of thunder
cannot equal the thud of my heart
it slips down a notch
lower, lower into the depths

Your eyes close, blocking away
all you feel
how can you love me, but not trust me?"

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-28 05:51 PM

i really liked the poem..
it was a intertesing read..
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-04-28 10:52 PM

This sounds like a really tough situation, having someone block themselves from you this way. You describe this very vividly... a very good read. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-04-28 10:56 PM

this is amazing i love it!

~katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-29 11:15 AM

Wonderful, the last thought. You express a lot of frustration in this piece, I certainly hope that you are alright.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-29 07:09 PM

I been there Regi......doesn't make sense does it?
I enjoyed the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

bigfuzzybear
Junior Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 11

6 posted 2001-04-29 11:01 PM

regina its me its a good poem and your style is definantly unique but i cant read it without crying and you know why and its so good that you write it out. I'm just saying its a great poem and since i read your poems i respect your genius and beauty even more,
cheer up,
brad

bigfuzzybear
Junior Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 11

7 posted 2001-04-29 11:03 PM

the more i read it the more powerful it gets and the realer it becomes. The words are from your soul speaking to me telling me to trust you and i do,
love you
brad

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-09 11:53 AM

~*gives Regina a Biggie Huggie*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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