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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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Through my window the sunlight poured, breaking the silent grip the darkness had. As the invisible touch of light crept over my eyes, I quickly embraced the warm sensations on my cold body, awaking my heart from its long slumber. Nestled tight in the deep serenity that had just engulfed me, afraid to move so that I wouldn't lose the fire that was quickly consuming all of my fears. As lingering emotions of anger kissed my lips as they departed from my beating chest, a new feeling of trust gently caressed my face as I awoke with a new heart. On the wings of a bird you flew into my life. You truly are the sunlight that warmed me, the feelings that held me, and the love that saved me. this a favourite of mine.. i hope u enjoy and i hope u like my new pic guys  |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
DANG!!!! the new pic hasnt been accepted yet >  [This message has been edited by acire (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Soon enough it will.. Anyhow, I did like this. Very well written. I think you did wonderful on it and I hope to see more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is definitly one of ur best.. i really enjoyed the read.. an awesome poem...pure beauty keep writing sarah  ps the pic it'll get approved no worries k?..bye  ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is awesome. Your photo is approved. But more importantly, this piece is awesome. Very very very awesome, although not one of your best. Doesn't that show what a marvelous poet you've become? ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Beautiful poem Sarah probably pne of your best I do have one suggestion though, It wouldve been better if you typed it in lines and stanzas just my opinion  keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sarah~ You are beautiful and this picture reflects that so much better Glad to see you changed it....this is a wonderful poem too SEA |
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