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Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

0 posted 2001-04-26 06:39 PM

*This isnt really one of my best poems...but its how I am feeling so I decided to post it*

Just forget it
Just forget it is what I said
Just forget it is what I mean.

Forget the way we were
Forget the way we are
Forget the way you held me
Forget the way you kissed me
Forget the way we laughed and even
the way we cried.
Forget the endless nights of talking and all the things you promised.

Forget the way I loved you with everything I had.

Forget the gifts you gave me and the all the lies you fed.
Forget the powerful friendship.

Forget the first embrace.

Forget the first kiss in the snow and the last kiss in the rain.

In fact I wish you would just finally forget me

To know that this means nothing to you at all,
to know I have given you my heart and soul.
I thought would help me forget,
but it hasn’t;
not a lot
not a little
not even at all.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-26 06:51 PM

this is so sad...and still so strong....hugs to you!

SEA

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-26 06:53 PM

poem was sad
nice job on the poem
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-26 07:01 PM

Very sad piece here. I hope all is ok.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2001-04-26 08:17 PM

*hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:41 PM

I really love the use of line breaks in this poem. In fact I thought it was genius some of the lines you chose to separate from the rest... very very well done.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

6 posted 2001-04-27 01:11 AM

Thanks everyone...its nice to know that people care and your thoughtfullness brought a smile to my face.
Always,
~Nikki~

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2001-04-27 11:23 AM

When painful things happen, sometimes it helps to just forget, but other times it's important to remember. Whichever one it is, I hope that you figure it out and are able to do it. Good luck, and good job on this piece.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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