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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This is one of the first poems I ever wrote. The last two stanzas get a little bit out of rhythm, though. Oh well, tell me what you think. Carry On Be cool Be strong Don’t be afraid to be wrong With your Faith And help from the Lord You can carry on Be great Be big It may take some time You may have to dig But with your faith And help from the Lord You can carry on Be smart Be quick Go ahead Take your pick Live life well Or out on the street With your faith And help from the Lord You can carry on Be alive Be fun Get out Go run Life is short You have only one With your faith And help from the Lord You can carry on - Cody - |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really enjoyed this. the format is good....i liked it in general....well done!  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really enjoyed this. the format is good....i liked it in general....well done! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Moi aussi. I did like the format, very original.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nice flow and format on this one ~Jason |
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CAP New Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 7 |
Nice, That poem boosted my confidence up a lil |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I think this poem flowed very smoothly, the whole poem was good. Two thumbs up by Low Man's Lyric! Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was amazing. more because of the message. the flow was excellent. all in all amaizng impact. library piece. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This is very good, and motivational. I like it. Good job. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
very nice  tiff  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked the message.. u put in here also the format was great keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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