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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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West Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-26 04:22 PM



I can't understand why before it was night
I never knew my life could be so bright
All though I try, and try as I might
I can't find a fault, nothing but white
Her voice is the soothing reassurance
that everything will be alright.
Why does she do that?

When I hear her laugh, I know by God's grace
That nothing else can take her place
I think she knows, but just incase
I would tell of my love for her
straight to her face....

Knowing she's there makes me feel secure
I love her so much, and i know her love is pure
I'm not sure about love and all that
but i think it is when i wonder
Why does she do that....

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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
1 posted 2001-04-26 04:27 PM


awwwwww ewoksters thats sooooo sweetish *Sniff* u dork u got me sayad nows....agains   lol newayz THAT IS GREAT my fav from u so far
loves u muchs:P *still has her new sox* lol:P
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Low Man's Lyric
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since 2001-04-03
Posts 236
In a dream
2 posted 2001-04-26 04:32 PM


Wow I can almost relate to this, I thought this girl knew I liked her but when I told her she was surprised, sadly though she already has someone in her life...well anyways good poem and I hope to read more from you.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
~Anonymous

Linc
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The Backstreet Boy
3 posted 2001-04-26 05:43 PM


Hey,

    *Sniff* Tiffany *sniff* took the words right out of my mouth (with out the dork thing   Until your next work

            -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 247
great state of illinois
4 posted 2001-04-26 06:08 PM


linc you werent gonna add the dork how sad   dork is an affectionate term used by all of us in my friendly house lol i dont know why we just stupid crazy like that i guess lol anywho ewok i loved the poem it is so sweet and cute man though i know ya may not wanna hear those words lol anywho keep it up bud ya rock

ben redshaw the great and deeply in  love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-04-26 06:27 PM


I enjoyed this. Thought it was quite sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-04-26 08:29 PM


Maybe your dorky house should lose the word "dork" and master the art of punctuation...  

Good poem, Rocko.     I look forward to seeing more by you.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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