Teen Poetry #4 |
Why does She do that? |
MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
I can't understand why before it was night I never knew my life could be so bright All though I try, and try as I might I can't find a fault, nothing but white Her voice is the soothing reassurance that everything will be alright. Why does she do that? When I hear her laugh, I know by God's grace That nothing else can take her place I think she knows, but just incase I would tell of my love for her straight to her face.... Knowing she's there makes me feel secure I love her so much, and i know her love is pure I'm not sure about love and all that but i think it is when i wonder Why does she do that.... |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwwwww ewoksters thats sooooo sweetish *Sniff* u dork u got me sayad nows....agains lol newayz THAT IS GREAT my fav from u so far loves u muchs:P *still has her new sox* lol:P tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Wow I can almost relate to this, I thought this girl knew I liked her but when I told her she was surprised, sadly though she already has someone in her life...well anyways good poem and I hope to read more from you. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, *Sniff* Tiffany *sniff* took the words right out of my mouth (with out the dork thing Until your next work -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
linc you werent gonna add the dork how sad dork is an affectionate term used by all of us in my friendly house lol i dont know why we just stupid crazy like that i guess lol anywho ewok i loved the poem it is so sweet and cute man though i know ya may not wanna hear those words lol anywho keep it up bud ya rock ben redshaw the great and deeply in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Thought it was quite sweet. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Maybe your dorky house should lose the word "dork" and master the art of punctuation... Good poem, Rocko. I look forward to seeing more by you. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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