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Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2001-04-25 04:45 PM

You told me you'd always be here
Friends forever is what you said
We were supposed to be together forever
You got a bad disease
You were to be here always

Friends forever you'd say
Together forever
You got really sick
Stayed in the hospital for a while
You were to be here always

We promised to always be together
You broke that promise when you left to be with the Heavenly father
I couldn't believe you left
Friends forever you'd say
Supposed to be together forever

How could you leave me here alone
I can't believe you're gone
Friends forever you promised
You weren't to be the first to go
Lying on your death bed
Singing church songs
We were supposed to go together
To be in a good place

Friends forever
You promised
Together forever

Dedicated to my grandmother and her sister. My aunt died of cancer. They were supposed to die on the same day, but God wanted her then. Rest In Peace, love, Michelle

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-25 04:55 PM

sorry 2 hear..hope things r better..
nice poem i liked it
and keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-25 05:56 PM

I like the variations in stanza size towards the end, the last one especially. It was a good way to bring the whole poem to an ending point.

Good job on this.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-25 06:11 PM

My condolences......
great tribute to the both of them.
I liked the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2001-04-25 06:29 PM

Such a sad piece... I couldn't imagine losing anyone extremely close to me. This is a wonderful tribute to your aunt and grandmother. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:31 PM

Aww.. this is sad. I'm sorry that this happened.
I enjoyed this poem quite a lot.
This is a nice piece. I hope to read more.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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