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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-25 08:41 PM

I wanna know, do you love me?
Or is it all just some cover up?
Because just so you know,
these are my emotions your playing with.

I have feelings,
just like you.
I've been hurt,
just like you.

And if you truly love me,
maybe you'll see how much I love you.
I love you beyond the depts of the ocean,
beyond the farthest reaches of the galaxy.

I love you.
Whether you love me or not is up to you.....

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved

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with you

1 posted 2001-04-25 09:12 PM

brave of you.....I like how you put it out there to wait and see where it goes....

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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

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Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-04-25 09:37 PM

omg i love this! how couragous of you to write this, i can so relate babe!!! good job

Valerie

AngelPoet87
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Indy

3 posted 2001-04-25 09:45 PM

Bold Statement Well Stated

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-25 11:59 PM

I liked it....the message is good and it's great that you vented this out.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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since 2001-01-04

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Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:03 PM

Good job on this, I enjoyed reading it. The second stanza struck me as unusual, in a very good way. Well done.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

6 posted 2001-04-26 08:15 PM

this was great!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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