Teen Poetry #4 |
Do you truly love me? |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I wanna know, do you love me? Or is it all just some cover up? Because just so you know, these are my emotions your playing with. I have feelings, just like you. I've been hurt, just like you. And if you truly love me, maybe you'll see how much I love you. I love you beyond the depts of the ocean, beyond the farthest reaches of the galaxy. I love you. Whether you love me or not is up to you..... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
brave of you.....I like how you put it out there to wait and see where it goes.... SEA |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
omg i love this! how couragous of you to write this, i can so relate babe!!! good job Valerie |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Bold Statement Well Stated |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it....the message is good and it's great that you vented this out. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job on this, I enjoyed reading it. The second stanza struck me as unusual, in a very good way. Well done. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this was great! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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