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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-04-12 08:15 PM

I don’t want to see
The anger of the world.
I don’t want to see
All the things around me.

I don’t want to see
The blood stained here so near.
I don’t want to see
Killers being set free.

I don’t want to see
The injustice of life.
I don’t want to see
This faded memory.

I don’t want to see
Friends abused, family slain.
I don’t want to see
That hate and love are key.

I don’t want to see
These things that I do know.
I don’t want to see
Rulers fall to one knee.

I don’t want to see
People give up on life.
I don’t want to see
The things happening to me.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

Dana Samples
Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 68

1 posted 2001-04-12 10:09 PM

okay... i thought your other one was my fav. but this has to be and if not its tied. i love it sooo much!!!! you are a great writer. keep on going dude!!!!!!

LoTs Of LoVe, DaNa

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-12 11:53 PM

I liked this but it wasn't my fav from you. Still it was a good write and bit of a change in style.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-04-13 03:34 AM

this is awesome!
keep it up
~kate

'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.'

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

4 posted 2001-04-13 07:59 AM

Hey,

Superb poem, I enjoyed reading it. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-13 10:09 AM

I liked this a lot. I liked the repition... Very nicely done!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

6 posted 2001-04-26 11:32 AM

wow man i really have to say i enjoy your poetry its just got somethign in it that makes it a blast to read so again i thank you for letting me read a poems so grand byt the great kosetsu

ben redshaw the great and now and forever totally in love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

7 posted 2001-04-26 06:54 PM

By the Great Kosetsu...hmm..has a nice ring to it. heh..thanks for the comments.

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-26 08:13 PM

Ben Radshaw seems to really enjoy your poem, especially since he's "now and forever in love."

Be wary of that dude Kosetsu...
Oh and good poem too.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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