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Aggravation, Irritation
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Aggravation, Irritation |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
"AGGRAVATION, IRRITATION" you’re driving me bananas i just want to throw my pajamas i’ll do it, i swear i’ll SCREAM i do but only in my dreams you’re sending me to the psyche ward drag my nails down a chalk board i could just hit something with my fist but then you’ll get real pissed i can’t take this anymore now watch me slam my head into the door i bet you get a kick out of this i want to crouch down and just hiss i’m grinding a pencil into my head look now i’m going to get poison from lead you just won’t shut up will you there has to be something i can do listen to the steady sound of me banging my head on the ground i want to squeeze all the past out of the tube of toothpaste then i could pretend it was you and your waste i think i’m going to… (explosions in the background) By: Dana Samples 4-25-01 (this happens to be about my parents. big surprise, huh?! hope you enjoy!!) |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hehe, I know what it's like to want to explode because of parents. Great venting piece here. I hope things work out.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Whoa kiddo, some really good imagery in this..*cringes* I hope you find some way to block them out, or go away, or something I don't know, but its not right that ya have ta feel so tortured...See you tomorrow, k? *hugs* Ciao ~Carly Love's just like a lucky penny, hang on tight and ya don't get any |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this....it was kind of odd, but enjoyable. Hope all gets well with your parents.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i knoe parents be like that...hehe hang in there and for the poem the imagery the way u wrote it all enjoyed by me... keep writing  ...? ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
hey dana hun i really liked this poem i know exactly how ya feel sometimes you just want to explode and let it all out anyway i really loved this poem and if you ever need someone to talk to hun just call upon ben ben redshaw the great and now and forever totally in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, WOW nuff said...this is....*speechless*... Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
BANG! What an awesome ending! This poem made me laugh for some reason, maybe I'm desensitized? Who knows...  See ya around girl. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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