Teen Poetry #4 |
Sundown at Dawn |
MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Have you seen the Sundown at Dawn? Those crazy times when you wake and expect a beautiful day to start You ask yourself "How's the Weather" you look out the window.... Dark skies rolling overhead the sky is crying you can't lose the shadow that takes your personality you feel tired after a full night's sleep What are these days for? As you begin to walk away there's a break in the clouds the sun rips through the seams of depression You realize, maybe God reminds you Even though theres a sundown at sunset It's there shining for you You are in the palm of the Almighty Go forth.... Be not shaken, nor stirred |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
ey! first of all.."WELCOME 2 PASSIONS" hope u like it here as i do and the poem was good i liked it..keep writng ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this poem greatly and hope you reply and post here frequently. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I loved this piece, the images were beautiful. Keep up the great work. Hope to read more soon. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful first post. A wonderfully written message of hope that we all need sometimes. Thank you for sharing. PS-check your e-mail "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, nice job on the poem! Really nice, I mean. The first stanza was very strong. I like the last two lines of it, creative thought... Welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
EWOK OMG I LIKE THIS MUCHS!!!!!!!!! lol welcome to passions hunnay i loves u *lix* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok wow ewok you loser now i have to stop posting poetry cuz allmy friends are so much better then me arg well grrrr later aweseom poem ewok ben redshaw the great and now slightly pissed i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! This is an awesome first post. I hope to see a lot more from you. This is a very powerful piece.. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Thanks for sharing! I know you're gonna like it here Passions is a great place. Keep posting and very nice work here. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
WELCOME!!!!! I really liked this! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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