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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Acire, I just found something, I think you might enjoy, I was wondering around Teen Explorer, and I found the truth or dare game, and I replied to your question, but to find out the answer, you have to go see, weither I picked truth, or went with the almighty dare, and I know this poem sucks, so, just go and see. Unfortunatly, I have to go, so I'll see you tomorrow. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha Allysa, that's all you wanted to tell me...You're lucky this is in a poem form all else I would've locked it "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent poem Allysa! One of my favourites from you!  Keep up the great work girl!   ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Acire you're such a stickler....maybe I'll compose a poem about that...hmmm "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Instead of arguing with me all the time, why don't you just go check my poem and see the true hopeless romantic meeh "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
noooo.. stop sayin that acrie  u have more talent more then u do acknowledge.. so STOP sayin that kind of stuff.. and the poem was great keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem, it said so much. The symbolism is amazing....acire symbolizing a tuna was simply genius. Wow....and your flow...your flow was AMAZING!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Oh, yes, wonderful poem! The whole tuna thing is just beautiful use of words! *~*Amanda*~* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i never got to get.. where the tuna that u guys talkin bout... ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha! VERY nicely done, Allysa! Heh, this made me laugh --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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