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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i see you standing over there standing in that corner the darkest one you could find your hiding in that corner thinking your not seen thinking your not loved thinking your not important thinking your not anybody but i can see you standing in that corner the darkest one you could find you cant hide from me because YOU are SEEN... because YOU are LOVED... because YOU are IMPORTANT... because TO ME! “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is wonderful!!  SEA |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
yeah you tell them. great poem. keep it up ~kate Life will always go on just remember to stay focused and positive. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job tiff.. i really like what u were trying 2 say.. keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Awww! So sweet I enjoyed this!"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this is quite touching. Shows you care a lot about the person you wrote it for. I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I really like this one. Probably one of your best that I have read, the structure of it is very well thought-out. Great repitition and organization. Hey, what can I say? Great poem! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww! This is very well done! I like the ending, the way you confirm everything the person is.. very sweet! Nice work, Tiff! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I loved the concept of the poem. It was really good. I enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
always good when there is an awsome meaning behing the poenms..good job *KiMMiE* |
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