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darn shoes are trying to kill me
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darn shoes are trying to kill me |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
im to lazy to pick up my shoes i trip over them everyday but i really dont mind because im to lazy to pick them up umm ok i was bored again lol and its short but o well “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
hey tiffany cute poem keep up the cute stuff i will talk to you later i hope bye i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
It was a cute little poem. Work off calories and pick up those shoes! LOL J/K *~*Amanda*~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I always love the symbolism in your work, this one hit a spot with me.  I'm afraid that not enough readers of your work take the time to appreciate the symbolism, and I urge everyone to do so. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*licks allan* u always encourage me in ur replys so thank you very much  thanx to all of yous guys *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here!!! haha i liked it! very fun!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this.. very cute.. heh. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
hey i like it. its short and to the point. it would be a lot better if it was longer but thats just my opinion. there are a lot of cool things you could do with this poem. it was creative none the less. lots of love, dana |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
HAHAHA! Boy, do I know the feeling! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the poem was... short..sweet and of course cute keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
HAHAHA -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Me too.  ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
*falls over shoes* OUCH ugh look what ya made me do..your laziness is growning on me!!! *KiM* "i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me |
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