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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-04-24 03:43 AM

What is real?
Is what you feel,
real?
And if you couldn't feel...
would you be real?

If you found nothing,
to be real
would it bring
you to your knees?
Get ready to kneel...

And if you learned
that all your deeds,
meant nothing...
that th things,
for which you yearned

weren't real,
could you heal?
from knowing,
what you felt...
wasn't real

Could you heal
from these blows
delt?
Or would you find
that what you think you know

would simply...melt...

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-04-24 06:54 AM

ohh i like very very nice keep writing!

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-04-24 09:38 AM

I liked this one Tony. Keep it up!

*~*Amanda*~*

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-24 10:36 AM

Great job on the poem, Tony.

Nice to see you posting again.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-04-24 11:46 AM

i liked this one...great poem..keep wrting

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-24 09:15 PM

I like this. Nice work!
Keep posting! I always enjoy reading your work!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-24 11:01 PM

*german* Velcome back my child!
Eet vas a gveat puem!!

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

7 posted 2001-04-25 03:25 AM

ok that was really cool i like the way you wrote it alot thank you for a great read tony i am guessing that is your name cause others said so lol
ben redshaw the great

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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