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Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-04-23 05:11 PM

I think I'm falling in love with you,
Every time you touch me,
My body gets weak,
You can tell how I feel when I'm with you,
It makes you smile,
It makes me feel light-headed.

I think I'm falling in love with you,
When I'm with you the fun never ends,
Hold me close,
Never let go,
Love with everything you've got,
I'll do the same.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-04-23 05:31 PM

Wow this was great. Nicely done in deatail. Who's the lucky guy?

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

2 posted 2001-04-23 07:43 PM

This poem was so full of emotion. nice job.

Iris

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-23 07:47 PM

Love... *Sigh* It's a great thing, huh?

Nicely done

Full of emotion!
Very well done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

4 posted 2001-04-23 07:48 PM

aww!!

2Good
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Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-23 08:57 PM

This is very sweet, keep up the good work.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-04-23 11:19 PM

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet poem..
i liked it..
that was nice of u to write something like this. hope u gave it to the one u wrote it for...anyways keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-04-24 08:44 PM

Such a sweet poem. Your poems are very romantic. keep it up and keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-04-24 10:56 PM

This was so so so sweet. I really enjoyed this one

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-04-25 01:44 AM

this is very sweet....

SEA

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

10 posted 2001-04-25 02:51 AM

oh wow that was really sweet i have only read a few things bye you but i love them all you are such a romantic and i love that its very sweet thank you very much
ben redshaw that great and now slightly teary eyed

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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