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The Worst Feeling
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The Worst Feeling |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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The one that kills your spirit The aching that crushes your soul The pain that lingers always with you The unchangeable mistake has been made Regret now eats at you well-being surpressed |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Regret is a horrible feeling, and you really describe this well. I really like the structure of this piece, the italics really emphisize the right parts. Wonderful work!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok i really liked it jenn i felt the words and i agree with lovebug the italics made those words stick out just right thank you for letting me read it hun luv ya *hugs* i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks a lot guys!! I am happy you like. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice work, Jenn! I really liked this a lot. The italics were very well placed. Good job! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well said Jenn... I truely believe regret is the worst feeling in the world. I hope future regrets are minimal. Jason |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks guys...! I'm glad you liked it. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Simple but very meaningful Jenn. I'll have to agree with you on that. regret does eat into your heart and soul. thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh... this really bit into me. The italics did wonders for the feel of the words, excellent job.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i couldn't concentrate on the poem... i was lookin at ur picture  ..hehe..kiddin..JUS kiddin.. OK! lets get back to the poem! ....the poem was nice the italic wordin was done very well.. i liked it and the poem itself had meaning.. keep writing death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey now! Was that sarcasm Mr.??? Meanie...  "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great piece of work Jenn, I really loved it. Simple but effective. Cute pic as well  " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job Jenn! This was short but had a great message. *~*Amanda*~* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sorry what i really meant was  hehe...  ....but really i meant was...ahhhhh  hehe...jus kiddin' but for reals tho.. "cute" picture as every1 had said already... ...so no need for the 's..ohh..yea and dont call me "mr." MEANIE  well..sometimes i can be..  tho if u really get to know me i'm really a nice guy .hehe.until ur next poem.byee.  ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it jenn. well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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