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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-04-23 10:25 AM

ok first of all i must say while this may appear to be a crazy bunch of nothingness there actually is a deep message hidden in there if ya cant find it ask and i will be pleased to share my thoughts

i really hope you guys like it thanx for reading it

why do you love me???
well gee let me see
probobly cause i am super
with a whole lot of duper
i am the greatest
but really kinda dumb
aww did the rhyme scheme go away
oh well, i am here to stay
oh look that that it rhymed
or did it go bye bye
anywho, where was i
haha i did it again
maybe it is because i gots me a magic pen
ok wut did i ask
umm i guess i will just have to bask
in this glorious and pretty sun
ok i will shush now cause i'm almost done
i know there was somethgin i wanted to know
well i cant remember it i so i will go
oh yea, why do you love me???

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-23-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-23 11:24 AM

Sometimes a reply can be summed up in a single smilie...
I wrote a series of poems like this once. It was about my back that was itchy.
But I'm so not posting it.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-04-23 01:55 PM

LOL this is interesting....hehe

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:41 PM

Heh.. this is an interesting poem. The whole thing really made me laugh. Thanks

I needed a good chuckle.
Thanks for sharing!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

4 posted 2001-04-23 02:43 PM

lol...

I think Allan should post his itchy back poems!

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

5 posted 2001-04-23 02:44 PM

lol dork :P i love u muchs *hugs* and lol i likes ur poem thingie thing lol
heh@u chattin like that all nite last nite:P
newAyz u r loved bcuz u r ben redshaw the great and bcuz u r U which is a very kewls dude person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*licks* love u baby talk to u tonight!
tiff

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-24 04:10 PM

Hey I liked this! Strange and quite interesting!! I really thought it was good hehe. Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

7 posted 2001-04-25 06:03 PM

Dude, sounds wack to me lol
Pretty good :P

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-04-25 06:05 PM

nah..man..it really did

hahaha..but for reals
i liked it!! very interesting..
keep writing
and until ur next

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Chel
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

9 posted 2001-04-25 06:17 PM

Since is the first time ive read your work, I just wanted to say... well...this piece was very interesting. I liked how you opened and ended with the same question. Thats was cool. Well keep up the great work. In your free time take a look at mine, would ya? Thanx

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

10 posted 2001-04-25 07:14 PM

I liked the poem. Very cool. Interesting way of writing, but I really liked it.

Yeah, Allan, what is this about your itchy back? Sounds interesting...

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

11 posted 2001-04-25 07:17 PM

Great poem. Sorry to take away from your peom, but what is up wtih the itchy back stuff? Anyway, great read. keep it up!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

12 posted 2001-04-25 07:56 PM

hey likes ben is it that we blank out when we think about y people love us because we don't want to think about y we r awesome but on all our faults instead probably messed up but i tryed interesting poem ben loves ya scarlet

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