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maze......maybe idk
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maze......maybe idk |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
looking back to a yesterday from a tomorrow that hasnt been past a today that shouldnt have happened finding myself in a maze... of twists and turns turns and twists twists that escape yesterday turns that bypass tomorrow a maze that leads me to today a today that shouldnt have happened “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
way cool tifferz |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent job. The repititions are marvelous, I especially like how you took "twists" and "turns" and expanded on the two thoughts individually. Wonderful. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
wow baby your awesome i wish my poems were half as good as your i love you tiffany with all my heart *kisses tiffany* and your amazing hun i will talk to you later today ok bye i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice! I liked this a whole lot. The whole maze image really worked for me! Very nice indeed. Good job! I look forward to the next... --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This whole poem was a twist and turn for me. I enjoyed it very much though! Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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