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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
I wear this mask of happiness to conceal my pain and lonliness Although no mask is strong enough To hold together the gragile pieces Of my messed up life Because no one will understand Who wants to deal with the pain Of someone else when they Don't even get their own? as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
This is the second poem I read from you, and again I know what you mean about a showing happiness and concealing my sadness. Good job with this. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs scarlet* i love you talk to me if u need too. tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
oh scarlet babe i love you so much hun your one of the most important ppl in my life i dont know wut i would do with out you in my life hun you know where to find me if you need to talk ok later *hugs* i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
thanx ben and tifferz love u too just tend to feelz that way sometimes but have no fears the dancing baby is here   its all good   as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's too bad that you have to feel this way... One thing I'd like to comment on is your icon.  . Pertaining to your name... it looks the opposite of "sleepy" if you ask me.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL, Allan... cute. I liked this a lot. I think many people feel that they have to have that mask with them. Learning to live without it is the hardest thing.. I'm sorry that you feel you need that mask. It's not a comfortable feeling... *hugs* Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. It had some thoughts that I relate to very much  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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