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Love Song |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA 
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Haven't posted in FOREVER...but here ya go... It's nothing I've never said before That each day I find I want you more I want you to need me Like I need you, don't you see The way I look at you every day I just want to hear you say You love me And you can't live without me I just wish that you would feel Like you do in my dreams You look at me with warmth in your eyes Still you don't understand the source of my sighs How can you like me so much as a friend And not foresee an "us" in the end? Maybe deep down you want to hear it too Want to hear me say those things about you That I love you And I can't live without you Too bad it isn't like that Anywhere but in my dreams So I continue to feel alone and depressed And these feelings makes me stressed Is it so much to ask to be wanted? Instead I feel like I'm being taunted Like someone telling me I'll always be Alone, loved only by misery There is no one to love me No one who can't live without me So I'll just have to keep on living Vicariously through my dreams |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
This is really good Sarah! I truly enjoyed it. I'm sorry you're feeling this way though. I can really relate..  Hope everything works out for you soon.. until then, the dreams are always a good escape.  keep posting.. *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Another Sarah in Teen #4?  I enjoyed this song quite a bit, I'm glad you posted it.  Maybe send me an MP3 so I can hear it sung? ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Allan and Silvrduck- Thanks so much! I appreciate the comments. Allan..i'd love to send you an mp3...only haven't quite figured out a tune yet lol...if and when I do i'll be sure to pass it along. Thanks again!~Sarah |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL @ Allan.. there are quite a lot now that I think about it! I liked this song! I couldn't put a tune to it, but I would also love to hear it sung! Nice work, Sarah. I look forward to reading more. Welcome back --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
That was really good, Sarah. Me likes  *TiMMYBoY* |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Thanks marie and mindless!! ~Sarah |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Singer1981....would this be considered to be an alternative song in a way? I need songs for the digital magazine that pertain to the alternative genre....and by alternative it's not just grunge.....it can be cranberrie type music or bjork....just stuff like that. E-mail me with the answer...or just post a reply here tonight....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Very good Singer1981, I really enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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