Teen Poetry #4 |
Happy For You |
fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Happy for You Whatever pleases you To your happiness A toast To burn down your false hopes Cheers After the party I'm still alone Congratulations You can lie to yourself Good work Someone should be proud Their wishes come true Sacrifice It could have been me Familiar Who would've thought dreams come true I can be happy for you Celebrate Got what you want alone Too alone once again My mistakes a burning knife deep I twist it myself Satisfaction Maybe now we'll realize Not to boast so happy Some don't need smiles But pity "The heart can think of no devotion |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
This poem is really really great. So emotionally deep, yet leaves the mind something to ponder. Great job. 2Good |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed this. I think you got a lot of talent. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this one.. great job!! and keep writing ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love the unique format, excellent job Ozz! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really enjoyed this one! Nice work! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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