Teen Poetry #4 |
you ask me why |
sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
You ask me why i would want someone like you I ask you how could i not You bring such joy to my life Of which i don't get much of I am not much to look at The scars of my life shine down You look right past that All you show me is love where I thought I wouldn't be able to find any Show me the rainbow at the end of the storm remind me there is a gateway of hope at the end Helped me to learn to love myself You don't get the chance... To have a friend like that everyday And you ask me why i would want a friend like you maybe the question should be who wouldn't? as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. [This message has been edited by sleepymoongirl (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
thank you scarlet so much i feel so alone in this world i some times wonder why i am here and i feel all alone i am glad i have you as a friend scarlet you know just wut to say and how i feel i love you and thank you i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. Very sweet, especially the ending. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
god scarlet you are great! i love you! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*group hug* aww |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
*gives all you special ppl a great big group hug* i love you all |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*coughs*cliche*coughs* ...? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol hush:P *licks all her ppls* heh tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
you wanna go albert i bet i could take you lol jk and my group hug was better cuz ummm it was mine yea that is it so hush fool hehehehe i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*gets licked* *says huh ?* *not knowin what that was* *instinct just tells 2 lick back* *so licks back 2 tiff* hehe..ok tiff but stop licking ...? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwww..i wanna join in!! *hugs EVERYBODY in sight!* the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
what? ur gonna sit on me man.... alright i'm koo.. but yea... jus look at ur replys and u'll c y i'm actin this..its gettin annoyin hehe alright man..i was jus playin wit u..haha..i wont mess wit ur little crew nomore p.s. u would regret if u take me cuz i'll kick ur A** 2 freaky mars.. eh? so don't even go there buddy... ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwww..i wanna join in!! *hugs EVERYBODY in sight!* the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awww but i only lick if i likes u *pouts* and wut made u think i was lickin u eh? lol u assumed that u were one of my ppls didnt ya:P lol *licks albert just cuz she can* heh ya likes that? tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwww..i wanna join in!! *hugs EVERYBODY in sight!* the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol *thinks cherish REALLY wants to join in* *hugs & licks cherish* lol there u go hunNaY! tiff yay i just figured out how to edit lol “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Don't come in here and mess with Albert!! This group hug is over! No, Tiff... you don't have to stop licking me. If only everyone shared Cherish's enthusiasm about this thread. (I've never seen a triple-reply being spaced out with another reply in between each one!) |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok its cool albert we buds now ok lol and umm baby i think ya need to keep your tongue inside your mouth ok i mean in yours or mine that is the only place it belongs so no more licking ok and no more hugs or i might get really jealous and make a kill list again ok mwahahahahah *tries to destract you crazy ppl* look over there *points* its a purple penguin a a blue monkey heheh they be playiong to gether aint it cute lol ok you guys here at passions rock ok i love ya all later ppl i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
awwwww i love you allan *hugs* we just playing we all good buds here lol hey arent you guys all upset i joined cuz now ya got a freak in your midsts mwahahahahah ....look green dog ate a pink cat wow this is a crazy place anywho bye bye for now i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
not exactly buds but jus acknowledgin others presence.... ...? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol@yalls :P cherish ur kewls hunNay!! albert i would of kept on lickin u just to bug u if u had a prob with it:P heh ben awwws i be doin more then lickin u babAy dont u worrys bout that omg lookies its a purple penguin ane a blue monkey:O *jumps on em* I CAUGHT THE MONKaY!!! yay *does the i caught the blue monkAy dance* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Godsend_1 ----> <----- Me I love you too bro! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
allan ben said i should marry u *sniffs* cuz i said u be kewl and he said if u like him so much marry him *wants to marry ben* *hides from ben cuz he will be mayad after he sees this* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm already marrying Carly. we're engaged. *shows the pretty ring* ooh idn't it pretty? And why would I marry someone who only replies in one thread? Go back and read something else, you crazy kids! Or check out the Explorer forum, where this kind of behavior is encouraged! It's right at this link here! There ya go! It's a lot of fun! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
awwww i sorry baby i was just messing *allan you better not touch my girl she is the love of my life* * is planning on marrying her* i love you baby you make me whole *kisses tiffany passionatly and holds her close to him* i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol u be doin it too allan:P :O u sayin im not good enuff for u *is hurteded* *jumps on ben* lol i love you *was kisseded* lol *blushes* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
one word "SHALLOW" pplz take allan's advice and go there.....Pleasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and all this kind of stuff u guys be sayin must WE know???????????????? pplz grow up ya'll... ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's OK Al, it's their thread. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok sorry guys we will be cool now i apolagize for all this i will see you all later ok and keep up the awesome work you guys produce and again i am sorry about this i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
no problem.. man also no need for sorries so...yea lets jus not have to go thru this again. ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What's going on here....c'mon guys....we have a discussion forum for this kinda stuff....it's called teen explorer....stick to commenting on the poem. NICE POEM! <------ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
thats exactly allans advice dopey it got carried away thou....... ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Woah.... what's going on in this thread??? Everyone is licking people, and marrying people.... craziness. You guys....you're really something...Ok... I don't want to ruin your fun...go on about your business! Oh...lol... nice poem!! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
laughs wow so this is what my poem brings out in people hmmmmmmmmm should i be worried? nah laughs hope u all liked my poem? as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
lol scarlet you are the coolest girl ever dork yups this is wut you do to us scarlet you make us all happy and cheerfull cuz you gots a gift and i love you *hugs* i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
The poem is defenitely sweet and it seems like it did hit it's mark Beautiful read. keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like this poem! And wow.. I think knightlyshadows does too.. Nice job! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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