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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-04-20 07:42 AM

To the angel I adore,
I write these poet’s words,
That she might find the things within,
Upon the songs of birds.

To the angel I adore,
I would give the brightest star,
That I might see her smile,
As it glistens from afar.

To the angel I adore,
I would give the reddest rose,
That she might feel the love,
That my heart bestows.

To the angel I adore,
I will prove my love so true,
Dear Angel of My Heart,
I love you.

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-04-20 10:30 AM

I liked this one. I like the style of the poem. Nice job
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-04-20 12:52 PM

The flow was very good in this and i liked the format a lot. this is really great writing, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-20 12:58 PM

This is so beautiful, Kosetsu! I loved it! This one's going into my library. VERY nice job!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-20 02:34 PM

I don't have words to describe this poem right now. It was an amazing read. keep sharing my friend

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-20 05:44 PM

I liked this, it was sweet. :o) Keep writing!
~ab~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

6 posted 2001-04-20 05:49 PM

awwww i like this one too..good job!!!

*kim*

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-04-20 08:16 PM

Gamer Boy is in love!

Who knew?
Best wishes bro! You may want to take her out some time, and no most chicks don't go for "Lord of the Rings!"

hehe
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

8 posted 2001-04-20 08:18 PM

lol...aww, but she might! Nah, unfortunately, her parents are real strict, and won't let her go out on dates until she's 17. Guess we gotta be content to cuddle in front o' a good TV show. *grins*

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

9 posted 2001-04-20 10:13 PM

Wow that was really sweet. Who says you have to go out to have fun anyway......

Bel

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

10 posted 2001-04-20 10:37 PM

I like this poem, it's awesome. Nice style and flow, and esp. content.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

11 posted 2001-04-21 01:26 AM

Beautiful poem. I enjoyed this.

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

12 posted 2001-04-21 11:44 PM

very nice, i like it sooooooooooooooooooooo much!! mos def goin in my lib.

Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

13 posted 2001-04-22 01:34 AM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this was soo sweet