Teen Poetry #4 |
define me |
grey::tears Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19lost within my mind |
define me tell me what i am and what goes on inside my head am i crazy? am i insane? is there a difference? insanity is doing the same thing twice, and expecting different resuts that was probably said by some freud wanna-be at a press conference to sound cool. i bet everyone was impressed. such bull. whos wierder? the one who fears death or the one who begs for it to come prematurely whos more pathetic? the one who gave up or the one who tried to help a worthless cause whos smarter? one who knows everything, but understands nothing or the one that understands everything, but knows nothing. whos prettier? the one who doesnt look it, but feels it or the one that looks it, but doesnt feel it who has more hate the one who hurts others or the one that hurts themself whos more sincere the one that lies well, but says what wants to be heard or the one that tells the truth, but says what no one wants to hear whos crazier the one you can see, and understand or the one in the shadows, that you fear A.K.S. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i liked it....maybe im not so insane after all huh? Jenn never knock on deaths door and run......he hates that!! |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i think both need help to see the world. and as for the spelling thing not the best speller either. its the feeling that r important cool insight. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great! wow....very well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Great job, this is that rare kind of poem that really makes you stop and think. Very deep. Gets the mind realing. Excellent job, hope to see another one from you very soon. ~ali 2Good |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked the way u written this poem out.very good job! and keep writing ...? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is great, I insist that everyone who read this read it a second time over. It's different once you know where it's headed, a lot more revalations are made about it. Keeping in mind the title, as the poem changed, I must say this was a real thinker that got my brain running. Well done! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
.......wow....! my brain's going off.. *buzz buzz*.. great read!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
.......wow....! my brain's going off.. *buzz buzz*.. great read!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, lots of truths in 'ere....I liked it lots... ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this a whole lot! It really got me thinking.. These are very well thought-out thoughts, if that makes any sense. Very nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
So many questions that has caught my curiousity. ~*applauds*~ This is really a great write "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Whoooo.. this is great. It really made me think.. i even read it over about 3 times just to try and get the full understanding of it. GREAT job! This is definately going into my library I hope you post more! take care, ~Sarah *love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Brilliant. Absolutely Brilliant. |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
that was awesome... makes ya think. Keep 'em comin!!! *TiMMYBoY* |
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