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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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When I was alone, And had no one to turn to... And who was there for me? You were there. When I was so unsure, And I needed the truth, When I searched for the one to help me, You were there. And even when we fell apart, And our fun was over. Even when I broke you're heart, You were always there. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds like a great person...I admire him  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a good poem but... to be honest.. this poem the way u written it sounds a lot like a poem by tupac called "GOD" anyways...i liked it though keep writing i believe u write something sometimes and it seems similar.. it happens so.keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I was thinking it might have something to do with a "god" of some sort. Nicely done still, Jenn... I like this one, whoever it was about.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey thanks for the replies. And I don't listen to Tupac... I think I may have heard like 2 songs... maybe. I didn't even know he wrote something called God.... was that the one for his mother? Anyway... thanks again. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its nice to see that you had someone by your side. You are very lucky |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nicely penned Jenn. whomever or whatever this is about sounds like a beutiful being. I hope to read more from ya Jason |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You're lucky you have someone like this. We all should have someone like this in our lives. It makes everything so much more beautiful.. Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like this guy might be a keeper Jenn  Thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah, you would've thought so. We aren't together now.lol Circumstances.... etc... "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Great Job, Jenn. It's good to hear you have someone in your life like that... Take care, keep posting! *love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nahhhh....its a poem called "GOD" lol !! not his mother and who calls their mother "GOD"..???? .......anyways...bye....  ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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