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who am i really? |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
Who am I really? i wonder as i look into the dark void called the past No telling what is real in this life Everyone is running from the truth Because everyone says the truth brings pain Everyone walks in their own world of delusion For reality is not always what we want Trying to find the real me in a reality Where everyone is trying to hide who they are It is though everyone wants to feel accepted Accepted for what? Who they are not We are so quick to make judgment… When most of the time we don't know who we are I know my road has had many bumps I am still looking for who I am There is still a long way to go Still many lesions to learn Can't judge the race, till its over as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a great poem I really liked it! Hope to see more of your great work oh and before I forget since I missed your first poem...  -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
first of all WELCOME to OUR FAMILY OF FRIENDS.. i glad that u decided 2 join.... and the poem was awesome.. great first post. i truly loved it i've written on the same subject.. i all the way related 2 that one . its really nice 2 know some1 else wonders the same thing.. can't wait till ur next... keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
hello scarlet i loved this poem hun i think you have real talent so keep it up *hugs* i love you |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
That was an awesome poem And very truthful too, something I can relate to. I would add it to my library but I don't know how :p*TiMMYBoY* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
To add it to your library... go to the top of your page... click "private library".By the way... I loved the poem. I can relate. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
u can also add it to your library when you reply to a poem by clicking on the options down below where it says "add thread to library:.."  newayz scarlet i liked this a lot hunnay! *hugs* love you muchs tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
ahah, I am adding it to my library *TiMMYBoY* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. Welcome to Passions! Hope to read much more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job on the poem, it had a lot of nice thoughts in it. Welcome to Passions in Poetry! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome.. Hmm.. a question that we all struggle with at one time or another. Nicely done.. And if you ever figure out the answer, let me know. Great first post. Looking forward to reading more. Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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