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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-04-21 04:11 PM

fluffy white and pretty
floating the whole day by
not a thought about tomorrow
a grace to envy
weightless
no burden for you to carry
so care free as the day passes by

(short yet nice one of my more happy poems)

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

1 posted 2001-04-21 04:22 PM

short and simple, good job. keep writing. ab

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-21 05:28 PM

i liked it...short and nice..
i also related to this one in a opposite way cuz i wrote a poem on this topic also but it had misery in my day..
anyways...keep writing and never stop posting

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-04-21 05:32 PM

Hey,

This a wonderful poem I love the poem! Enough said

until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-04-21 08:02 PM

Short but sweet. Sometimes I just like to stare at clouds... hehe
nice job

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

5 posted 2001-04-21 08:09 PM

that one was short, and nice. It was just.. nice, lol. I liked it

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

6 posted 2001-04-21 09:47 PM

*does the scarlet is so cool and has talent dance* hey hun i loves you sweet raven keep up all the good stuff ok

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-21 09:58 PM

Well done. Short, but that is my preference in being a reader and a writer. I enjoyed this very much.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-22 02:16 AM

Very nice! I've written poems like this before.
Clouds are neat.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-04-23 08:59 PM

I enjoyed this! Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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