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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2001-04-19 05:13 PM

Happy If Lucky.

I don’t think that she loves me
I think she’s just confused
I think that she’s above me
I think that I’m abused
I think that it’s not worth it
I think I’m in so much pain
sometimes I couldn’t give a damn
if I ever saw her again
I think that I am awful
I feel I might forget
all those things that are not lawful
things I might regret
I think that I am tired
I think if we had a song
I think when I was wired
something did go wrong
You may need to hate me
you may think I’m confused
but in this world of lately
I have not been quite amused.

This is an old one I don't think that I have posted it but I might be wrong...
<<<_ Andrew_>>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 04-21-2001).]

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-04-21 03:34 PM

Heya Zu, this was a pretty good one..you got your thoughts and emotins out well.....stay peachy!

~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-21 04:23 PM

good job keep writing
ab

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-21 08:39 PM

holy! i can't believe this got passed me.....geesh!
well i liked it ...not as good as some of yer latest, but still rather enjoyable.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-22 01:48 AM

It sort of reminds me of a punk rock song in terms of lyrics. Just imagine a bass line in the background. ANYWAY, this was very well written keep it up.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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