Teen Poetry #4 |
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starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
*Sometimes* Sometimes my mind is just an empty room. With nothing left for me to consume. and in the end it all seemed worse. that i just want to hollar and curse. Sometimes my soul is just an empty field. Lying there just waiting to be healed. I don't know how to stop this misery, Life isn't all its cut out to be. <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you." [This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You're right.....but then again, sometimes it is. I liked this poem. well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very true in my own opinion. great job on the poem! and keep sharing and writing ![]() ![]() death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
"Hey...tell me what you think of my poems. Don't be too harsh, I already know their not the best." Don't hide your ablity behind such self-degrading statements. I won't tell if you don't...hehe ![]() WAIT! Opps, i guess the secret's out. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
lol who r u talkin 2 ???? dont worry bout him as i said the poem is still great ![]() well then.. can u reply 2 my poems...hehe ![]() i'm jus playin but deranger y u gotta say that here? ![]() death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
great poem i feel the same way at times but i also feel that life can be a great journey depending on how you live it keep up the goods stuff |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah don't mind Al and Deranger... they're weirdoes... ![]() I liked this poem, it was pretty good. I'm with Javier, sometimes they are. ![]() ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice poem, starry. I really liked the emotion you put into this piece. *hugs* I hope you don't feel this way all the time. Keep writing great poetry.. it helps. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this was deep, keep writing, ab *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Life is what it actually is...HARD Fighting thru it is what makes us a better person so, keep fighting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
dorks *points* there over there. ![]() nice reply hun i agree! i liked this one very muchs. thanx for sharin tiff ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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