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princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-04-20 10:06 PM

Don't say the things you claim are true
You're making me fall for you
Don't sprinkle sugar or kiss my hand
I can't love another girl's man

Don't say that you feel for me
It only brings me misery
To hear the words you often share
Convincing me you really care

Don't say that I'm a pretty girl
When she's the center of your world
Can't you see that what you say
Touches me in a special way

Don't compliment me, it breaks my heart
Simply tears my soul apart
Go back to being just a friend
So I can put this to an end

i hate it when guys flirt wiv u and then just ignore u when u flirt back... but thats onlt happened to be twice... all the other guys just ask me out

..LOL

[This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 04-20-2001).]

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-04-20 10:12 PM

Very awesome poem... I can totally relate to that, although I'm a guy and she's a girl. Another great poem that I have read of yours, Sarah. Keep it up, I enjoy reading your poems.

- Cody

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-20 10:15 PM

4 sure.. 4 sure...
ur really good at portrayin
ur thoughts and emotions
in2 poetry thats one of many things
i enjoy ur poetry
great job on this sarah

and keep writin....

...?

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

3 posted 2001-04-20 10:35 PM

I like your poem, Sarah... I hope I enjoy all of your poems as much. I'm new here, btw, hehe.

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Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-20 10:47 PM

very interesting situation indeed

how can he be saying all that when he's with someone else
he's a playa, that's right
i'm glad you're not falling for his moves

keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-21 12:12 PM

I know what you mean about the flirting thing! Hah, I think most girls can identify with that one.
Very nice poem. I liked it quite a lot!
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-21 01:33 AM

Well......I don't ask women out....never have up till present day and i'm 18.....God what's wrong with me?
Anyhow, nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

7 posted 2001-04-21 01:55 AM

Simplicity and intensity...stunning combination.

No this may sound immoral...but what is wrong with loving two people? Is there some law somewhere stating, "thou shall only care for one person at a time"?

Curses! We are all but mice arun in soceity's maze!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

8 posted 2001-04-21 04:30 PM

nice poem, keep writing
ab

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

9 posted 2001-04-21 05:43 PM

Hey,

I am glad it only happend 2 *

this is a great poem keep them comeing. Until your next poem

-- linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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