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Sabriel.s.h.lover
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-04-20 04:23 PM

They were made for each other,
They looked like they'll be together forever.

For when they look into each others eyes,
They see the heavens ansd the stars.

And when they're together they hold each other tight,
If they could they'd be there all night.

They'd stay there together on the front porch,
Thier love burning like a well fueled torch.

Every day thier love grows stronger,
And every day for each other they grow fonder.

Rach813
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 30
Maine

1 posted 2001-04-20 05:05 PM

This is a really good poem describing the love between two people! I love it and I wish I could find someone to love me like that! Very good poem!

~Rach~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-20 08:12 PM

So cute! I love it to bits.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-20 10:46 PM

Aww.. this is sweet! I liked this piece a lot, and the use of the couplets really added to it!
Very nice.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-20 10:58 PM

beautiful read my friend. just look at what love can do to people

thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-21 01:54 AM

Very sweet. I loved this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-04-21 02:15 AM

nice poem...i liked it
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

7 posted 2001-04-21 05:18 AM

this was one cute poem..

i gotta ask you sumthing...have you read the book "sabriel" by garth nix??..great read.

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

8 posted 2001-04-22 06:08 PM

Cherish,
Yes actually I have read that book, that's where I got my name from. It's a awesome book for anyone who hasn't read it yet.
Sabriel~

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