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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
here is a short thing that I started reflecting apon when I was meditating yesterday (spare time staying after school and all). I sit in peace And reflect on thoughts Keeping time at hand... Chaos comes And Entropy reigns And Apathy is supreme... My thoughts break up Time to move has come "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow... i think the only time i feel like that is when im drawing...you become so focused at what you're doing yet simultaneously your mind takes you on amazing "thought trips". wonderful poem..i loved the last line! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one. Quite good!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice job. I enjoyed this one a lot. Keep posting! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very nice... some clear thoughts here.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Short sweet and very deep! I liked it!! |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Well done ^*Bishop*^ |
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