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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
Even though they bicker and they fight, They still love each other by the end of the night. Even though sometimes she may, She knows for her, he would die. Even though they may break, They get back together, for each others own sake. Even though he loves her true, He can never seem to say "I love you." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hmm...kinda made me think of my parents. good job, keep posting *dq -=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=- |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm with Kiley, it made me think of my parents. Sad... ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so sad. Anyone who can relate this to what has or is happening in their households, I'm sorry. This is a good piece. Lots of emotion... I enjoyed it quite a bit. --Marie |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey, As long as he makes her feel loved, that's all that matters. Actions are better than what he says and doesn't do  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow! This was great! I really liked this poem. Well done! Lots of emotion in this.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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