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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia 
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Sometimes, I feel lost, so lost. As if I am frozen in time, But the world is moving on, And no one stops to care, About what is happening to me. Sometimes, I feel trapped, so trapped. Like I can't get out, And the world is closing in, But no one stops to help, When I cannot break free. Sometimes, I feel alone, so alone. As if I had no friends, But the world just doesn't care, And no one stops to feel, How hurt I am inside. Sometimes, I feel scared, so scared. Like I will always be the same, And the world will keep on changing, But no one stops to see, Just why i don't fit in. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem... i totally related to that. its how i exactly feel not sometimes but all the time.. i think u have a lot that u went thru and still is also. so i really hope that everything works out for u in the future cause i knoe how its like. and this poem was just amazin' keep writing marie....bye   ...? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey girl ~*hugs*~, and I'm not gonna let go  we're here you know so stop feeling this way "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Sometimes is an important word in here...  It's even a relief. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm with you Marie. I feel so alone.....very alone, in fact. I thuoght this poem coincided with my emotions perfectly right now. Very well done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
I like what you had to say.. and I can relate with some of it. Keep writing *TiMMYBoY* |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, WOW how did I miss this its first time around? Oh well I get to enjoy it now, I liked it alot. I just want to let you know I am your friend anyway its still a superb poem-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this was good, keep writing, ab *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I totally felt this one. I really can relate to this. Keep writing!! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Gee, Allan has made a lot of good points in your replies. "Sometimes, I feel scared, so scared. Like I will always be the same, And the world will keep on changing, But no one stops to see, Just why i don't fit in" I think we've all been there and know how you feel. Nonetheless, it is a great piece. You're truly a brilliant writer. You need to write a book or something.  Thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier |
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