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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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The key to every locked door you find Is deep within your heart And even if you haven't found it yet Its not too late to start So search you heart and soul You'll be amazed at what you find The memories that you had forgotten Those thoughts in the back of your mind. And eventually you will find that key It may not happen in a day But at last you will have sorted through your life And (I hope) had some fun along the way. I'm not scared of what is behind each door I figure it cant be worse than my life So I look forward to finding that key in my sould And may what I find will end all of the strife. Also a earlier poem. Enjoy! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* [This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very good poem, Heavens. There are a few typos, but nothing that really needs to be fixed. I really like the rhyme scheme here.. I think the flow also works out very nicely. Good job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
And I read this poem while "never had a dream come true" was playing over the radio. Amazing. Ilove the words you're trying to spread out to everyone. Thanks so much  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
This poem is deep and I really like it and its meaning. Keep writing. "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
o o o i love that song...and i love this piece! it be goin in too me library  tiff  |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Soul, not sould.  Still, not a bad poem.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Ooopsie. As always, I type these things in a rush. Ill fix it!! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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