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fozzyozzy
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0 posted 2001-04-09 08:27 PM


Inspiration

It's a matter of token instigation
It's a gift that god gives us
Only in fleeting moderation
The symbols a trademark across the universes
And it can't be bought by opening up your purses

First the love for despair and clear
Wondrous for a while
It is the only motivation that I fear
Nature close in second
Bug bites and poison ivy more than reckoned

Next comes friends and family, now we're on the Ritz
Almost exactly like love aforementioned
Only without the physical benefits  
Music becomes a personal favorite
With Napster down, I hope I can afford it!

Greater poets even better than me
The book covers are nice
Alas! I'm too illiterate for poetry
TV brain candy for my head
Specially cable before I go to bed

Here are the major inspirators
Frankly nothing more than lackluster motivators
Weed is the king no doubt
I'm sure Dopey knows what I'm talking about
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Before you begin hurling bricks through my window, take this poem as a joke.  It is only a joke  

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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© Copyright 2001 Sean Michael DeFlora - All Rights Reserved
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viginia
1 posted 2001-04-09 08:38 PM


Tee hee.  don't worry, i won't be sending any bricks through your window.  this is great, alwys nice to get a light hearted piece in here once in a while.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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2 posted 2001-04-09 08:41 PM


Heh.. this is a very creative post, Fozzy.. entertaining  
Thanks for sharing.. always a pleasure to read your posts.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2001-04-09 09:00 PM


Haha.... I love this completely!  Great job, Fozzy Ozz!     This is going to my library, it made me laugh out loud!  
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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4 posted 2001-04-09 09:44 PM


Hahaha I liked it!
I especially liked the ending. It made me laugh out loud.....Hahaha I'm still laughing.
Good poem!

<--- not weed! It's a...erm....lolli-pop end that caught fire  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-04-10 09:15 AM


Great post, it made me lol hehe, good job.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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6 posted 2001-04-10 09:18 AM


I needed a good laugh.  Thanks!  Great job!

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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7 posted 2001-04-20 11:27 AM


I enjoyed the read till i saw someone's name in there  
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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8 posted 2001-04-21 01:03 AM


You know you love me  
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