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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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0 posted 2001-04-20 03:24 AM

i knoe i posted this eariler. but only two people saw it.
i just wanted to share a poem cuz i always be talking bout life(as u might say its been "borin')
so this ones on a "love seekin'" instead of "in love" or "hearbroken love" poems..enjoy
and dopey u can read it now.i re-posted it hehe "its not that good"
but u kinda wanted to see it so here it is

....

this moment
i feel more isolated from society
in deep loneliness
which i’m desperately seeking for love
to guide me through the long path
for my hope to the better times
though i search but i find
that i have nothing to discover
cause there is no one in my life
no one that cares
that i seek is there
for who could possibly fulfill my needs
where my needs are greater than sadness
depths which cannot be measured
i am by myself
in the greatest thing in life
discovering -LOVE-

november 23

hope u liked it though

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-20 03:52 AM

Albert I enjoyed this poem GREATLY!
I loved it, to be honest. I like how you expressed how you were alone in tryin to find love. Very well done, very!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-04-20 10:32 AM

I liked this one alot! Not too often you get a poem about trying to find love. It was really good.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

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obscured vision

3 posted 2001-04-20 11:25 AM

o i like that muchs!
*hugs albert*

tiff

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-20 01:02 PM

This poem portrays so much... I really liked the way you expressed yourself and your lonliness.. VERY nicely done.
*Applauds*
Enjoyed, as always.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

5 posted 2001-04-20 02:49 PM

Hellooo there! This was a great one, al....enjoyed much by me.

~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

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6 posted 2001-04-20 04:28 PM

awww...that was a really good read. Amazing what you guys come up with. lead me to jealousy and envy. keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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7 posted 2001-04-20 06:37 PM

thanks for all ur replys..but guess what i already found my love..
as i

javier, i

keoni, i

tiff, i

marie, i

carly, i

acire...etc
well........i

everyone at passions yea!!!!...

..hehe. cya

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anonymous albert ?

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8 posted 2001-04-20 07:00 PM

and also almost forgot those two people who replyed....i

allan,i

anonymousfemale...how could of i forgotton..thansk again to those who replyed.

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-04-22 11:37 AM

This was a great poem!!! I dont know how i missed it the first time around but im glad i cought it this time!! Good job

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20

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Texas

10 posted 2001-04-22 11:42 AM

I liked it..

I can relate, and I'd say it's much better than a poem by myself on the same subject, hehe.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

Bishop
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since 2001-04-22

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Nottingham, England

11 posted 2001-04-22 12:12 PM

I know how you feel. Coz i have the T-Shirt.
Keep it up!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

12 posted 2001-04-22 01:26 PM

thanks much from me ialso think....
i

Michele, i

tim, i

matt....
jus another thanks 2 u guys...hehe

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death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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