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Where Angels Belong (poem) |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Where Angels Belong The sky opens, it speaks wise words of the stars. Utopia can be seen, a whirlwind of thoughts are thrown from above, crashing down into a whilring vortex of nothing. Such valuable language, says nothing of interest to me. The philosophical meanings, are just trapped thoughts longing to be free. Empty, foreign, nothing to understand, very wise words in another land. A single leaf falls from a tree, following the echo from the message to me. Floating high above the stars. In search of the meaning, of the message, to this visit. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Welcome!  We're glad to have you. Hope you enjoy it here. This was very refreshing, keep up the great work.--Check your email, also *dq -=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=- [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 04-16-2001).] |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
I loved this poem, cant wait to see more "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions!  I really like this first post. The descriptions are beautiful. I can't wait to read more. Keep writing, sharing, replying, and posting. Nicely done --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to passions!!!! I hope that you like it here just as much as the rest of us!! Great first post and i cant wait to see more from you!! Welcome!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow this completely rocked. SO deep and thought-provoking. This poem was written VERY well. I enjoyed this completely! Welcome to Passions! Hope to see more  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Passions... I hope you enjoy your time here like the rest of us do... Great poem, I thought that it was well written so keep up the good work. It's also nice to see someone else from England. So until your next poem. <<<_ Andrew _>>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Welcome to Passions great start hope to see more. Now this is the place where I would say "Until your next poem" but since someone already said my line haha oh well -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! this is a really great first post, you did a very excellent job on it. i look forward to reading lots more of your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job! I really liked this one! I guess everyone here is getting better, b/c I have seen so many really good poems floating around here lately! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hiya hiya hiya! Welcome to our world. This is a great poem..I enjoyed it lots. Keep writing!!~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
This poem rocked! Hope to see more from you. |
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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
welcome to passions. great first post. cant wait to read more of your stuff. everything is skin deep |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice to see you 've decided to join us here in passions for poetry. hope you do enjoy reading and sharing as well. I loved your poe, as you have impressed me already with your talent in writing. I hope to see more in the future "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very good job on this poem! I think it was very thought provoking, the rhymes were well-placed and it really seems like a poem that you would recite aloud with ease, without any definite rhythm. Some poems don't really need rhythm, and this one is one of those poems that works fine because of the sentiments. I do like this a great deal, I wouldn't change a thing about it! Welcome to Passions in Poetry! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Very Very good. It reminds me of my girlfriend and I. I think that u value love and see where you coming from with this poem. Keep writing ^*Bishop*^ |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Could u plz look at my poem, "Terminal Disease". Thx a lot ^*Bishop*^ |
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