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Empty tears
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 64

0 posted 2001-04-09 08:13 PM

The sobs come
No tears accompany them
I have run out of tears to cry
I used them When i lost the daddy i loved
I used them when i lost the boy i loved
I used them when i lost being good enough
And now ive used them all

Death is but an escape from loneliness

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-09 08:35 PM

Short and sad and very well written. i'm sorry that you're feeling like this, i know i've felt the same way more tahn once. keep writing beautiful; poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-09 08:45 PM

Wow. this poem really hit home.. I'm sure it did for many of those who read it.
Very nicely done, Empty Tears. This poem is filled with pain.. I hope things get better for you.
Nice job.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-09 09:01 PM

Is this descriptive of your username? Very nicely done.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-09 09:38 PM

Quite sad here. I felt this a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:46 AM

Great poem. I know your pain. I am always here to give you ahoulder to cry on if you find anymore tears to cry.

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2001-04-10 09:48 AM

I felt that I could really feel your pain and sympathise with you on this one.
Andrew.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2001-04-10 03:58 PM

You're always good enough...though sometimes its hard to believe that. You did a great job on this, putting your feelings onto the paper, er..screen. Smile.

~Carly

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

8 posted 2001-04-10 04:28 PM

Such a sad piece... it must be hard to have to go through all of this, and I hope writing this helped you feel better. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-20 11:40 AM

The tears will come back, and I hope it's happy tears this time

thanks for the read
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Silver Butterfly
Junior Member

since 2001-03-13

Posts 42
Between here and the end

10 posted 2001-04-20 09:45 PM

The "i used them..." parts were so powerful. And they were very easy for almost anyone to relate to. Good job. Ciao!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-04-22 11:48 AM

This was SO sad!! I read it like 5 times i think...this is definately one of my favorites from you...amazing job

Bishop
Junior Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 30
Nottingham, England

12 posted 2001-04-22 12:10 PM

Sad and short. Very good

^*Bishop*^

*Evil has many faces, and I'm one of them*

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