Teen Poetry #4 |
you mean the world to me |
boarderfreak9 New Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 3 |
YOU MEAN THE WORLD TO ME this is 4 my girl. i rely on you, and your always there, and i thank you 4 being stong, when im at my weakest point. you mean the world to me, and i wont let you go with out a fight, cuz you mean just that much, just that much to me. i hope you last long , as long as i have something to hold on to, i hope and i pray, that i can say its you. id give my life, for you to live , and id would die happy, know your alive. i cant ask you more, than just to be with you, because you are my girl, and you mean the wold to me. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
welcome to passions hope u like it here and very good first post! the meaing was a nice one... but i gotta say ur lucky 2 at least have some1 to lift u up at ur weak times unlike me where i stay weak...as i hold on by myself and i'll write a poem on that someday hope u'll read it. anyways good job ...? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! This is a sweet first post. Very enjoyable. Hope to see you post and reply more! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
WELCOME to our wonderful world. I enjoyed this first poem, so sweet...Well I hope to see you enjoy yourself here! And check your e-mail. ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was a very nice first post. You are extremely lucky to have found someone who you care about so much. Hope to see you around some more Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! this is a great first post, i'm glad that you have someone like this in your life, that's always good times. i hope to read lots more from you in the future, so keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! Very nice first post. I enjoyed reading this very much, and I'm looking forward to seeing more. Keep writing, reading, sharing, replying, and posting Again, welcome and very nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy What a wonderful first post. You did really good. Thanks for sharing with us your poetry "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I did enjoy this poem! Welcome to Passions! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to passions!!!! This was a very cute and a very sweet first post!!! I hope you like it here just as much as the rest of us! I cant wait to read more from u |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Good first poem. Keep it up!!!! I know what u mean. I'm the same with my bird! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welome to Passions! Good job on this first post, I hope to see you around here more "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oooh very nice! As usual I'm a bit late... but eh, better late than never!!! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Es MUY precioso! *L* Did I say that right? Ah whatever, you get the point-- this was SO sweet *wipes a tear* "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
thats a super sweet poem. nice flow now to watch the baby dance!!! |
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