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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
You saw him going You told him not to But he looked back and smiled And you knew his mind was made up No matter what you said he was going Your tears, your pains, did not matter “Why did you leave me so alone?” “What if you didn’t go that day?” The ‘whys’ and ‘what ifs’ you always ask The answers are never to be For what is in the past Lies in the past Forever without a care You realized you couldn’t change that What has happened cannot be changed But the future can be BUILT To look back means You’re turning your back on the future The past is what has gone The future is what is to come You choose where you rather be A hurtful past or a changeable future. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Powerful poem, I can relate to this. Sometimes I get hanged up in the past and I ignore what should be done in the future. i liked this and I hope to read more from you, oh and I like your signature. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Enjoyable poem. Very nice. I liked it. And I agree, the quote is great.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I really like this, very powerful writing indeed. thanks for the read, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a very powerful read. I really enjoyed it. Keep posting. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
im addin this to my library  yay i know how to do that now...kinda sorta atleast tiff  |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
that is very good.. and very true.. keep up the great work.. i hope to see more of it soon |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, this is a very good piece. I really enjoyed this... it's very powerful, and hit really hard. Very nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
To live in the past is defenitely wrong, but to look to the past is not. This what allows us to learn and move on into the future the right way  Wonderful poem, thanks for sharing"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this one it was written to really get to the reader. great job  powerful and a enjoyable read.... keep writing.  ...? |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Thanx, you all liking this poem means a lot.... This poem was written from myself to myself .... It was a wake up call and it truly made me turn my life around. To know that it's also appreciated by you all means that this poem isn't appreciated by me alone.Thanx once again for the support. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
Awsome work, I thought it was very heartfelt and I hope to see some more of you stuff soon. "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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